What happen? How did you fill? What was you reaction? Well I was inside with my wifey next thing you know I hear is everybody yelling screaming with fear. So I ran outside not knowing what happen so I ran outside with my pops shotgun thinking somebody or something attacked my family. Next thing you know I seen my brother on his knees I have never ever seen him so sad.
I seen him sad but like that day no. I don’t wish that to nobody in the world not even my worst enemy. Is the worst feeling in the world you could be the biggest buffest guy in the world but when you see 2 people in the world that you love the most 1 in his knees and 1 on his arms and the 1 he is holding is your niece and she cant breath and she is passed out. Trust me you’ll cry like a little baby or worst. But really if I hade 1 wish it will be never ever have to go thru that again that will be my only 1 wish.
When I seen her in my brothers arms I felt terrified scared sad angry. I felt like this was the end of us. I thought wasn’t gona come back to us. And if she wouldn’t have I knew for a fact this family wasn’t gona be the same any more. But when I seen my niece I blacked out forgot about everybody all i8 knew is that was my niece and we hade to save her one way or another.
So everybody was yelling at my brother telling him lets go to the hospital and he wouldn’t move he was just looking at her. He wasn’t crying his one of does guys that don’t cry but I knew he was crying in the inside and that hurts more. So I told him wey lets take her to the hospital and when I did he looked up on me. With some eyes the saddest eyes I have ever seen in the world. So he got up I ran to the car to open the door and turn on the engine so he ran with her in his arm.
Got in the car so we all left to the hospital and while we where going to it she open her eyes everybody was so happy but we where still scared so we got to the hospital and my family was their same as my sisters n laws family we where all so scared so we where just waiting to see was up and I couldn’t wait any more so I walk in to the room and seen her when I saw her I got so happy I have never been so freaking happy she saw me and she gave me a big a smile like a big girl so yea after all that I went to wall-mart and bought her this cute a baby and she loves it she always jugging and stuff so yea I love her like no other girl or woman in this life
What did I learn from it? What did I learn from it is now I know what to do what to do in that moment I learn to not freak out like everybody ells you should be scared but you shouldn’t freak out you should react quickly fast and do what you got to do to save the person you love. And that change my relationship with her I like I’m more careful with her I pay attention to her more I mean like 24/7 seen that effect her I try for her to not fall hard or something so yea I’m more careful with her because I don’t nothing like that to happen again so yea.
Friday, October 2, 2009
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5 comments:
1. The part when he sows that he cares for his niece. 2.Watch for the hes and shes. 3. HE learned to not freak out. 4.I think your still a great guy to have has my friend.
#1 the part i liked the most was when he came running outa the house with his pops shotgun to protect his family.#2 the one thing that could be changed is the spelling an grammer so its easer to read.#3 the leason frado learned is that his family is his main priority in life an that when ones gone it will never be the same.#4 waita go dowg family is a big thing to me too keep da family safe an outa trouble
1 that cool how u took care of your friend in that moment.
2 i thought that is was good.
3 not to frake out at that moment.
4 idk
i can relate to that a little bit my nice was only a few months old and she stopped brathing and we had to call the ambulance. everybody was affraid and they were cryin. its hard.
I'm sorry for what happened to you and your family with your neice. I was scared at the beginning of your writing, thinking that your neice was going to die at the end of the story. But I'm glad that she was fine in the end. I know that it is hard to not freak out in a situation like. As much as you want to stay calm, especially when it is a family member, you just want to make sure they are okay. But you are right, we do have to be more careful and treasure the people we love everyday.
-Natalie
CO 150
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