Friday, October 9, 2009

Persuasive Paper

Hey what do you like better subway or McDonald’s? why do you like it better? Well let me tell you something hope I can change your mind to start eating more at subway because subway is way better good taste long sandwich and you could even choose your own toppings on it and you not eating as much calories like at McDonald and not just that you are even eating good and healthy. Your eating your vegetables so I freaking love it way better because you eat good and healthy and not unhealthy. So start eating more at subway and eat way less calories.

I think well I don’t think I actually know that subway is way better than McDonald’s because it has one of the best freaking I mean best taste flavor is the bomb. The taste is so good and not just that is good is baked and made fresh every single day so I love it like a fat kid like my self love’s cake.. when something is made fresh that’s what makes it way better I mean god its just the best it’s a big fat wow baked and fresh everyday. So I rather subway than McDonald’s.

Than another thing God I love it to because it could be more expensive but its way freaking better because while your eating it. Your not just eating good taste you are eating healthy to because your eating so many freaking less calories and not just all fat grease. Oh and guess what ells your eating you might not know but guess what a lot of people don’t know this and they say they hate vegetables but what they don’t know is that they are eating all does vegetables and guess another thing. You could even lose weight while eating their and eating healthy.

And last but not least the best best freaking part of it and the best thing of it is that is bigger longer. And than you can not only have a big long tasty sandwich you could even choose you own toppings like you can choose what you want on it. and what don’t you want on it. and not just that you can choose your own toppings on it you can even choose what you how big or how small you want it and god man I love it big time subway is way better than anything out their but Mexican food.

Ok look check this out. If you keep eating at McDonald’s you going to gain weigh. Then get all fat and then your going to want to drop some weigh. And guess what you could gain weigh so easy but to lose weigh it way freaking harder. So if I was you or anybody ill stop eating that because it’s to make you unhealthy so please start eating more at subway and eat fresh.

9 comments:

ava said...

1. subway is better then MacDonald
2.long,more flavor
3. yes i do

cristian said...

1..subways is better then mac donalds
2.. longer more of the food better taste in their food.
3.. i think your is good because sub way is alot more healthier then fast food.

joey said...

1.Subway is better than mac.Donald's
2.More flavor,healthy,and less cal.
3.yes I like it long.

Donavan said...

1. Eating at Subway and not McDonald's
2. The taste of the food, Eating heather food, The amount of the food.
3. You can improve by not starting like u now the person that you are talking to, finish your thought, use some better gramer to and punctuation to

johnathann said...

1.that subway is better than McDonald
2.the taste,healthy,more food
3.you repeat yourself to much lol but good job

Anonymous said...

I agree with you on this one subway is most better.IT does have a bomb taste .I liked reading this because you write alot differnt than other people its really funny.
Ashley h

dillon m said...

i woul perfer mc ds be cause it s really good but subway could be good sometimes.

Jose Alfredo S Gtz said...

1. subway is better then MacDonald
2.More flavor
3.I like it

Jose Alfredo S Gtz

jake j said...

1. there main idea is that they like subway.
2. they like the tast and how chep it is.
3. i think that you dont know how to make up your mind,but like it