Mm. - Mom
My mom means a lot to me she is my role model, why you ask she’s always been there for my brother an sister she had a drug problem for ten years and now she’s finally getting over it that’s why she is my role model. It proves nothing is impossible.
Pp - Price
Price is where I grew up. Iv lived in price four 18 years born an raised my family lives in price too they have lived there their whole life as well so I proud to say were I’m from because we about 50 deep if you know what I mean.
Jj - Jullinn
Jullinn is my brother he’s sixteen about five foot seven he loves to play basketball an chill with friends he’s really out going if your having a bad day he will cheer you right up. He’s really positive but if you piss him off he’s one to throw a big attitude and finish what you started.
Friday, November 13, 2009
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Jonathan,
Honestly, although your autobiography is short I like it. You have all the big pictures in your little story. I personally like your autobiography about your mom because I also think of my mom as my role model, too. You know if you can somehow elaborate on your autobiography and make it a personal story, it would be a real good story. You have the thesis, that is the points of what you want to talk about. I like it now, but I can't wait for you to try to write more about it and take it to another level. Sounds to me like your mom is your inspiration and you look up to her all the time. I'm sure that your mom would love to hear that she's your role model. I encourage you to write more and I think that you can really make this a great story. I'm so excited for you to try it! Remember, nothing is impossible!
~Rea~
COMP 150-83
Jonathan, I think it's way cool that you think of your mom that way. It's amazing that you can have someone in your life that is there for you and help you when you struggle. I think of my mom in the same kind of way. Good job writing this paper. You put thought into it!
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