Friday, February 26, 2010

Poem: Love?

“Love?”

At times love could hold you back
like your in a cell with cold metal bars
holding you back from your freedom and dreams

you feel like leaving
but you don’t want to break another heart
that loves you passionately,

I can’t figure out what to say,
cause I love to do things
that she won’t let me do

so I’m asking you to give back my freedoms
cause I still got my dreams
and I’ll always love you

7 comments:

Matt B said...

That is a really deep poem that i think can tuch a lot of pepole keep going don stop

Jake B said...

mo bien amigo keep it up

Brice said...

I agree about peace and every thing that is so true

alejandra said...

thats so tru...

cindy said...

thats true until you fall for the wrong person

Jose E said...

i agree its the the truth

cristian a said...

yea thats was good thats how it is