Friday, February 26, 2010

Poem: My Love Jane

“My love Jane”

I woke up one day with nada to do,

So I got out my note book and started writing about you.

I love this girl her last name is Jane,

I love her so much she’s always in my brain.

She gots me flying high like a freaking plain.


When I step outside late at night she gives me a kiss and I could feel it inside.


When I think about you I go crazy

When I hang out with you all I get lazy.


I love my girl Jane,

And to prove my love I’ll even get tatted up your name.

My love Jane.

9 comments:

DANIEL said...

IREALLY DO NOT LIKE IT BUT IT SOUNDED GOOD IN THE BE GINING

Alfredo said...

I didn't know you hade such a vocabulary I love your girl she is mying to!

Alfredo

alejandra said...

haha you love jane?n Thats cool. well good poem.

Pablo said...

Thats bad G keep it up.

cindy said...

find something else to write about guadalupe ok

alejandra said...

i wish i could fly like you lupe :)

chris said...

this is good i love her to jk

JOSEFINA said...

lupe men this poem is so tight that i don't even know what to say it would be more cool if you wrote this about a real person because i know alot of people that have been around with M.J

brice said...

that is a good poem