Friday, March 19, 2010

Poem: Emotionless Day

“Emotionless day “

Happy, hate, horrified, sadness, anger, and loneliness
Haven no emotion is the best
No worries about anything
Or disliking anyone
Cause your just waiting for the day to be done
You could see a smile upon my face
And you wouldn’t know I’m having a emotionless day

10 comments:

daniel said...

keep the good werk up

vosco said...

i think it needs some emotion in it.

toyz said...

i hate crappy days i like this pablito good job

cindy said...

hm pablo when you feel like this i would like to help you menso

daniel said...

hay pablo that was a good poem keep the good work up man and you will sucksed

Rickey said...

Sounds sad but it's a good poem

miss toya said...

o Pablita are you for real jk jk. i like this at times having no emotion is the shiznit cause then you aint gotto trip about any thing or on any one i like this good work keep it up mi amor jaja

April said...

Wow. that was good. It's like it makes you stop and think about what other people are going through. good job.

cindy said...

dang i feel like that every day .just cant wait to get out of school

alejandra said...

dang i feel like that a lot. everything is going to be ok pablo... mom still loves you :)