Friday, March 19, 2010

Poem: Love

LOVE

Times are hard but love is sweet.
The smell of her perfume over whelms me.
When I’m with her I fell like I can fly.
With out you I fell like I’m going to die.
My parent doesn’t like you but I’ve gone to love you.
When nobodies there your always there to comfort me.

6 comments:

daniel said...

pritty good i think keep the good werk up

April said...

WOW. That was a really cute poem. good job.

Anonymous said...

That's deep sounds really hard hope it works out

Kirra said...

Wow! This is really sweet. You must have really cared for her. I really like your poem it's really touching.

brittany said...

ooooooh that's cute

Dallas said...

Love love love all you need is love.
:)
i like this poem its cute