Falling
Falling from the sky
Falling so fast don’t know
What to do slowly falling from the
Sky posted with a parachute don’t now
When to pull but when I come close to hitting
The ground I pull then…. I wake up
Thursday, March 4, 2010
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7 comments:
I really like this poem is not to much or to little good job
Alfredo
That must of been a crazy dream.
that was a great poem keep writing
that's a powerful poem. you have a lot good powerful lines like Sky posted with a parachute don’t now
When to pull but when I come close to hitting
The ground I pull then…
good job
um the same happens to me in my sleep =)
That's crazy. That sounds like a bad dream.
I really like how you describe when, how, and why your falling. When you wake up it intensifies your poem. Great job!
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