Friday, March 19, 2010

Poem: I Give Up

I give up

I give up on you
You know I hella
Like you
And you can tell I do
So now that I give up on you
I’m going to move on
But with out you
I hella like you but
I’m not the type of
Fu to beg for you
Don’t get me wrong
Mija
You are worth it
But
You don’t show no
Interest
So that’s why I’m
Giving up on you.

9 comments:

cindy said...

dont give up chikitito ..

devin said...

i know what thats like man

matt said...

deep shit man i like it good job

ALEJANDRA said...

WHAT FREDO... DONT GIVE UP... GOOD POEM :)

Maryssa said...

Alfredo, I understand what you're feeling because I've been in the situation and I did the exact same. I gave up on a person and a while later, they realized what they had before they let it go, and wanted me back. I'm not saying play head games, but just give it time! Good job expressing yourself!

Jose E said...

aint notin but the truth dawg

April said...

Ha ha that was tight. not tight in the ways of it relating to you but the way you wrote just sounded good.

alejandra said...

im sorry fredo. i hope you guys can still be friends and it all works out in the end

.ulises:. said...

dont give up fool.