Friday, March 12, 2010

Poem: I Had You

I had you

When I see you I smile
When I don’t I get down
And when you’re around
All I want to do is
Hold you.
But I can’t!!!
When I hold your hand
I don't want to let go,
But I have to
When I look into your eyes
Is the best feeling ever
Is like a natural high.
You’re like my phone
Always want to have you
Around.
And always hold you,
Play with you,
And see you
Dang I wish I had you.

8 comments:

cindy said...

wow teddy bear i just wonder who your talking about???

Anonymous said...

o snap who is she? she sounds very special to you i love this poem i Love this part "When i look into your eyes its the best feeling ever is like a natural high." keep up the good work i loves it!!!!!

daniel said...

that poem is pritty good it had pashon

Maryssa said...

Alfredo, aww that's so cute! I love how you used similies and you express yourself so well! Hopefully this girl you're talking about, knows you're feeling like this for her. Great poem!

April said...

Oh! that was cute. That made me think about Boyd. That's how i feel everyday and it's like time goes by so fast.

jessica said...

i relly liked your poem it was awesome shes a lucky girl!!

ALEJANDRA said...

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. GOOD JOB.

Brittany said...

That's a really good poem i like it a lot its really cute